Tuesday, April 11, 2006

Perception Comments

Rating: 5.0

I have come to the conclusion
Through a process of perusion
That the source of our confusion
Lies in concepts we believe;
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Linda Ori
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Alison Cassidy 26 December 2008

This is brilliant Linda. The structure of the piece is impeccable of course - (who would expect anything else from your fair hand) and the subject matter is profound. I'm delighted I went poking about among your poems today. Wisdom artistically penned. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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LINDA...I LIKE THIS VERY MUCH...THIS IS YOUR'OTHER SIDE' IF YOU WILL...STRONG INNERWORKINGS PRESENTED IN AN IMAGED, & PHIOSOPH ICAL VEIN...THIS IS TOO MUCH ON MY BRAIN AT 3AM, LINDA.....BUT I LOVE IT '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK

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LINDA...I LIKE THIS VERY MUCH...THIS IS YOUR'OTHER SIDE' IF YOU WILL...STRONG INNERWORKINGS PRESENTED IN AN IMAGED, & PHIOSOPH ICAL VEIN...THIS IS TOO MUCH ON MY BRAIN AT 3AM, LINDA.....BUT I LOVE IT '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK

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Chuck Audette 19 April 2006

This has a great rhyme scheme - so fun to read! -chuck

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Daniel Tyler 15 April 2006

Innovative rhyming, reminded me of 'Thrasher' a song by Neil Young because of the choice of 'ion' words. He sang 'They were poisoned by selction/Became park bench mutations'. It rolls off the tongue very well.

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