Friday, January 8, 2010

Peppermint Comments

Rating: 5.0

Unwrapping the clear wrapper
Sliding the striped red stripped oval
Between teeth, tonguing it
Softly and slowly at first,
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Anjali Sinha 21 January 2010

wowwwwwww i felt coooooooooollllllllllllllll lovely write -10

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Gutter Box 08 January 2010

Haha very nice poem Sam..You had my full attention the whole time I was reading this. Great job..keep writing..You are very descriptive. ~T! &R&

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