Friday, May 9, 2014

People With Wishes And Dreams Comments

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Everyday people awaken,
To make their choices.
And...
Everyday some may delay,
...
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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Colleen Courtney 09 May 2014

Wishes and dreams are but hope. And hope is what makes a person awaken every morning. Nice write!

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wishes and dreams and making into fruitful the dreams are the real essence of life. The poet made a good poem into small lines and ideas in it.

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Lawrence S. Pertillar

Lawrence S. Pertillar

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