People Next Door-2 Comments

I see your dog Partying in the Evening With the VIPs of the city Beautifully crafted.thank you for sharing this poem 10+++

I see your dog Partying in the Evening With the VIPs of the city Men inferior to dogs..these nasty neighbours. Nicely penned satire.

I see your dog Ride a car in the aft With the angel of the town Dogs of rich people are luckier than most of our people. Nice poem. Thanks poet.

Mermaids in the veils, Kings of the sales Patting on its fur While I wait at, There a lay man For everyone at the door. While dogs are preferred to men at door, this world of rich and privileged have little to do for the people around. Shocking to read about that. Thanks poet for the nice work. 10++ for it.

I see your dog Partying in the Evening With the VIPs of the city Mermaids in the veils, Kings of the sales Patting on its fur While I wait at, There a lay man For everyone at the door. A great comparison between a beast and a human being in eyes of rich men. Thanks for this lovely attempt. 10+ for the poem.

A reader will not miss the sarcasm for the people next door for whom their dog is far more important than a man outside. Makes interesting reading. Thanks a lot.

I see your dog Partying in the Evening With the VIPs of the city Mermaids in the veils, Kings of the sales Patting on its fur While I wait at, There a lay man For everyone at the door. Unfortunately a security guard has less importance than a Dog. Sensible poem. Thanks for it.10 for the poem shared.