Saturday, August 19, 2017

People Next Door -1 Comments

Rating: 5.0

I live next door,
Next to
The compound wall
Separating us.
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Subhas Chandra Chakra
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Anita Aparajita Das 13 February 2018

For I never lied I never stole, I never picked any stuff That was not mine, And I loved to remain as I am I remained poor, For I was a lover- A lover of nature and A true neighbour. Beautiful, sensitive. Great poem

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Soumya Ranjan Rout 17 November 2017

I loved to remain as I am I remained poor, For I was a lover- A lover of nature and A true neighbour. Thank you for sharing this poem 10++++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 08 January 2018

Thank you Soumya for the beautiful words of encouragement.

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Rajendra Rout 28 October 2017

And I loved to remain as I am I remained poor, For I was a lover- A lover of nature and A true neighbour.sir this line was very beautiful.thanks for shairing...10++++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 08 January 2018

Thank you Rajendra for the beautiful words of encouragement.

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Binayakumar Mohanty 13 October 2017

This is the MUS of life of Subhas Chakra.I enjoyed sir.Humble! 0++++++For the poem.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 08 January 2018

Thank you Sir for the beautiful words of encouragement and for the multistarred Zeros.

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D Priyanka Singh 24 September 2017

For I never lied I never stole, I never picked any stuff That was not mine, Nice poem sir, about a neighbour.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 08 January 2018

Thank you DP for the beautiful words of encouragement.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 15 September 2017

This appears to be a slur on the manner of ur neighbours living style You may mind the sinuations you make her AND most importantly why all fist letters as Caps that is compy's need not poets See my poetry as a sample u may great views any way rich men have their own way to show off and waste they give more meat to dogs daily as we may eat yearly

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 08 January 2018

Thank you dear poet friend for the beautiful words of encouragement.

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Suratha Kumar Rout 14 September 2017

I hear The music of utensils Every day.. Yet my kids feed on stale rice, And stomach full of Free water, The life of the poor is so painful. Nice poem.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 08 January 2018

Thank you Suratha for the beautiful words of encouragement.

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Anita Aparajita Das 24 August 2017

For I never lied I never stole, I never picked any stuff That was not mine, And I loved to remain as I am I remained poor, For I was a lover- A lover of nature and A true neighbour. Beautiful narration. Thanks for the nice poem on how a neighbour should not be like. Thanks for this nice one.10++ for it.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 08 January 2018

Thank you Neetu for the beautiful words of encouragement.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 21 August 2017

Yet my kids feed on stale rice, And stomach full of Free water, For I never lied I never stole, I never picked any stuff That was not mine, So sad about these insensible persons in our society...10 for such a nice poem

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 08 January 2018

Thank you Rimi for the beautiful words of encouragement.

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Rajnish Manga 20 August 2017

Good neighborly behaviour shows our civic sense and concern for others. We must respect each others privacy. Nicely expressed.

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Thank you sir for your valuable remarks for my poems.

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Sabita Sahoo 19 August 2017

For I never lied I never stole, I never picked any stuff That was not mine, And I loved to remain as I am I remained poor, For I was a lover- A lover of nature and A true neighbour. Beautiful, sensitive. Great poem.10 for it.

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Liza Sudina 19 August 2017

Money mean nothing! you are pure and happy full of love to nature and people! For I never lied I never stole, I never picked any stuff That was not mine, And I loved to remain as I am

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Thank you Ma'am for your gracious remark and keen observation.

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Edward Kofi Louis 19 August 2017

Love and life! Facing the odds. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Thank you sir for being so kind at reading my poem.

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