Wednesday, December 10, 2008

People Hardly Notice... Comments

Rating: 4.6

Curls of blue smoke,
Deep and Dense,
Rising up...up...up...
A Vampire From Death...
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Raihana Abdul Jabbar
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Rizwan Saleem 18 February 2016

Lovely expressions and ring true to this world around us today

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Yaseen Anwer 23 December 2008

Nice Penned, i must say u should feel proud of this pieece vof work being a poet Cheers..

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Sarwar Chowdhury 12 December 2008

Fine reflection indeed! Nice wording! .....10+++

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Pollutant vampires on the loose.Powerful personification or should I say 'Vampification' Very Well written.10/10

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C T Heart 10 December 2008

True Raihana. You have got a very good social and environmental awareness poem here. a 10+++

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