Monday, May 9, 2011

People At Sea Comments

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There are people at sea
Feeling the gentle breeze
Where the sun shines down
And they are tightly bound
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Darius Fields 09 May 2011

I love the idea you use. But I believe you could have written so much more. Use comparisons of the sea to peoples feels. I like this poem. Good job! !

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