Thursday, April 3, 2014
People Ask Direction 2 Comments
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people ask me life questions
looking for personal direction
they are searching for enlightenment
I can tell them only what I found myself
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8/2/2025 9:09:47 AM # 1.0.0
That is certainly much better. I can see that you want your reader to lose the rhyme at the last two lines for forcus. However, you are giving up much of your meter and rhythm. If I may be so presumptious, how does this work: And need a nod, an affirmative retort. Keep writing.