Tuesday, March 11, 2008

People Are Like Guns Comments

Rating: 4.5

Behind the trembling barrel,
A revolver smile sometimes conceals
Crazed, hollow-point intentions.
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Gary Witt
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R H 22 March 2008

Jam packed with sharp, hard hitting imagery this poem employs carefully chosen language to deliver it's message. From the opening lines the image of '..revolver smiles' sets the menacing tone from the outset. A thought provoking piece, which adds weight to well worn phrase 'trigger happy'. j.

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What comes first I wonder, the madness or the weaponry..... a cleverly penned piece G. t x

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