I like the sentiment in this poem. Do unto others as you would like they do unto you.
The rhyming is good, Melissa but you lose the rhythm, Too many syllables in some of the lines.
An extremely good effort, especially for a fourteen year old.
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I like the sentiment in this poem. Do unto others as you would like they do unto you. The rhyming is good, Melissa but you lose the rhythm, Too many syllables in some of the lines. An extremely good effort, especially for a fourteen year old.
No problem, thank you for spotting this, I will try to improve on this Thankyou very much x