Wednesday, June 4, 2014

Peonies Comments

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Petal soft and pristine white
Billowing cloud-like bundle
Of fragrance fresh
Where my thoughts can fall asleep
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Susan Lacovara
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Bri Edwards 01 May 2019

i like the alliteration " delicate defiance" although it defies my desire to understand its meaning. yes, SOFT, and white, pink, and red. to MyPoemList :) bri speaking of moms, my mom, nearly 55 years ago, used to have lovely (aren't they all) peony 'bushes' near our side porch.

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Chuy Amante 04 June 2014

Wow! That was music to my soul! ! ! A+++

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Susan Lacovara

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