Tuesday, November 1, 2011

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My eyes are eclipsed,
Partial darkness has rested within my eyes,
I see remnants of flecks of glorious light,
Yet darkness hath shrouded such weakness,
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Crimson Love
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Harindhar Reddy 04 November 2011

'Yet darkness hath shrouded such weakness, Igonimies of crimson, abundant are they? ' Hello dear! You rocks with this poems. You expressed some inexplicable poems with ease as cool breeze. That's why I love this poem. to the poem 10+++++ rating! To the poet 100% marks!

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Lenore Lee 01 November 2011

This poem is written magnificantly and describes your feelings perfectly. Although, there are alot of complicated words there - maybe I need to keep a dictionary with me to interpret it correctly... =)

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Anncelin Dev 01 November 2011

a very well written poem! ! ! .....i am glad tht u invited me to read this :)

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