Tuesday, December 15, 2015

Penguin Comments

Rating: 4.0

Podgy pelvic parade
Prancing propped up paunch
Prattling pompous pique
Podgy peculiar pout-
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Seema Jayaraman
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Seema Jayaraman 24 December 2015

Thank you Wes. Am so glad and happy you enjoyed this one, yes loaded with Alliteration. And most of the time I write while commuting to work or back hence not much time to rhyme them. But some day I will revisit all of these and retouch them.. thank you and wish you and your loved ones a Merry Christmas.

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Wes Vogler 18 December 2015

It does abound in alliteration. I like it. Must try one of same only I cannot resist rhyming.

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