Monday, October 27, 2008

Penetrative Addiction Comments

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Its gotta be penetration to get her up high
And if she's other than dry; then she is ready to fly
Her lips are moist and ready to own
She's hungry for more...
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Drake Kinkaid
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bombdiggitty princess ! ! ! 29 October 2008

hay.. nice. ever thought about writiong for mills and boon? lol

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Wandering Scarlet 28 October 2008

when making love becomes merely a sensation rather than the bonding of two souls....one of life's tragedies

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Evaughn Gray 27 October 2008

this is a really good poem it's very enjoyable to read and think about..keep writing ~Hazel Green Eyes

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*Trusting You* 27 October 2008

lol that is amazing! one of my favs now! *10*! I love it and know that desire that you write about all too good. I know that fire as well. great write! *Purkey Girl*

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Serenity Prayer 27 October 2008

i love it. i can relate. great job.

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