Monday, November 14, 2011

Penetrate Comments

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Penetrate me...
but don't leave....
stay there,
Feel me within,
to leave me speechless outwardly,
...
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Crimson Love
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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 15 November 2011

Yes, it is a great poem, like Jamal F said, , , it really have a sexual sense...beautiful though Crim.......

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A Lifetime Of Fame 14 November 2011

Very lovely poem. Brings out a lot of feeling. But the ne sense that I get most out of this (and call me perverted) is a sexual sense. Whether I'm right or wrong, it's a very good write.

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Dave Walker 14 November 2011

A great poem, i see a few meanings in this. A great write.

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