Pendulum Comments

I fly in the sky of ego and love My heart's pendulum - - - dang but you can put it together! ! ! love your style! 10++++++++++

Ali, this is genius. Indeed what you say about the heart is so true....the heart can be tiny and unyielding and unforgiving. But it also has the potential to be a wide and all encompassing as the sky. A wonderful poem.

Clever idea, and way of writing...it really your style and of course its wonderful! by the way your heart is also llike a mirror that fool gravity because you can levitate the feeling while you still standing here...and it reshaped by what others show to it...also yours is a pendulum that not swing but moving freely!

Torn between ego and love, your life sways like a pendulum! That's the predicament of most of the humans! We cannot be all love, sometimes ego shows its ugly head! Great understanding of human frailty!

Beautiful poem. Caught between love and ego, the dilemma of the human heart. Nice flow n imagery. A big 10.

I fly in the sky of ego And love Like a pendulum.The crisis nicely crafted.Thanks for sharing.10++++