Sunday, February 26, 2017

Pendulum Comments

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Two senile men locked in an empty room...
one sits back and contemplates the other
while the other sits back and contemplates the first
they question, examine, analyse each other
...
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Mahfooz Ali
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Jazib Kamalvi 08 April 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Mahfooz. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 28 February 2017

Initially I got an impression that you were aiming at gays poetry when each was watching the others pendulum you did a U turn well done Hopefully Glad you are not gay but one may by your title imagine well done Lucknowee poet

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Mahfooz Ali

Mahfooz Ali

Lucknow (U.P.) India
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