Thursday, November 9, 2017

Penciled Ponderings Comments

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Midst photographs that ‘changed the world'
I spied the Nebula Pencil
with linear shape wooden burled
evoking writing utensil.
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Michael Walkerjohn 21 July 2020

Aloha Harley and Cheers! I ponder many of the same and similar pictures... That child... that star nursery... and harbour many of the thoughts herein... and IAM just reading you? I enjoy the notes also... I must consider more profoundly how it is I read these selections... All of the best from this life, to you, and to all of our relations... Michaelw1two

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Harley White 23 July 2020

Images can be powerful and some are truly haunting. I'm pleased that you followed along on the 'journey' of this poems, as its twists and turns took you. How marvelous that you found my poetry and have been reading some of them! I am indeed grateful!

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Jette Blackstone 18 November 2017

Your poem is beautiful. Thank you for providing the footnotes about not only the Pencil nebula image, but also of the other more 'earthly' photographs. I love how a poet can take an image, write a poem about it, find the connections and the emotions that can pull the most seemingly disparate images together. I won't forget about that child nor that star. Thank you.

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Harley White 18 November 2017

The perceptiveness of your comment has moved me. I’m gratified that you responded so deeply to what I hoped to convey in this poem. I also appreciate that you took the time to read through the notes. Thanks very much.

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Bill Cantrell 12 November 2017

Heavenly celestial phenomenon, a muse bellowing out in penciled ponderings our sufferings, you tie many things in this one, very impressive to see your poetry and your armada of vehicles you choose to deliver, be it super nove, white star, Nebula or a song, it is always a journey to say the least

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Harley White 13 November 2017

I truly appreciate your attentiveness to my poems! Yes, there are many themes and extremes in this poem. What a wonderful comment you have made! Thank you so much!

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Harley White 09 November 2017

I had to delete the poem and post it again and unfortunately lost the comments. Sorry...

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