Penalized At Sunrise Poem by Aqua Flower

Penalized At Sunrise

Rating: 5.0


Don't hate me cause I'm me
productive in the morning and happy
some people function at night
some people prefer the daylight
No one is wrong
but you make me feel that I don't belong
uncomfortable in my own house
why must you be such a louse
let me live in my own place
so that I don't have to see your disapproving face

Copyright @ Aqua Flower

Friday, December 7, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: belonging,conflict,fighting,separation
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kostas Lagos 08 December 2018

When there is a chasm between two people living under the same roof, everything is a cause for conflict. Even the morning mood.10!

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Aqua Flower 09 December 2018

Chasm it is! Thank you for your astute reply!

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Matthew Holloway 08 December 2018

a hard write, powerful and potent

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Carl Roussell 07 December 2018

One should never be made to feel out of place in their own home - that is just plain wrong.

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Aqua Flower 09 December 2018

Thanks Carl...Yes being in your own home should always make you feel comfortable.

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John Beaton 07 December 2018

Clocks out of synch. No reason for antagonism. Affecting and sad. Nice poem. John

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Aqua Flower 09 December 2018

People don't change but their feelings do! Thank you!

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