Saturday, July 2, 2016

Pen Sieve Comments

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My pen is my friend,
My counselor, my hero,
More powerful
than all the Fires,
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Sandra Feldman
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Daniel Brick 03 July 2016

Of course, nearby this poem is the noble expression THE PEN IS MIGHTIER THAN THE SWORD. But you don't have to say that - it will pop into the mind of anyone reading with attention. Instead you first write about the rapport between poet and pen, mind and tool. And that softens the emphasis on d-u-t-y at the end.

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Chuy Amante 03 July 2016

go forth! with flame thrower in hand knowing inside you can smoke any man! ! ! Long live Sandra's pen! ! ! ! !

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Bill Cantrell 02 July 2016

I find it to be my addiction

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Kelly Kurt 02 July 2016

Lacking the ability to do much else about the woes of this world, I too find it a duty to write

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