Sunday, April 5, 2009

* Pen Pusher.......... Comments

Rating: 5.0

Words attempt me
Whisper from within
Softly pushing
Metallic pen ball ink
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Rommel Mark Dominguez Marchan
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Susan Aparejo 08 July 2009

yes, a vivid description of a pen and the writer. So impressive poem. It helps me feel i am the pusher.

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Elvira Marchan 12 April 2009

Let the words attempt you and whisper you from within.........to push you to write terrific poems..touching poems, , , , impressive poems.....

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Ency Bearis 11 April 2009

Awesome verses...nice concept with the truth as implied...10

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Fay Slimm 07 April 2009

Your opener says it all - -'words attempt me - whisper from within ' - showing the real poetic source - -and as you rightly say those words push the pen along.... a true definition of muse directing the mind...... 10 from Fay...

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Juneil Sechico 06 April 2009

Nice write! You're right! Criticism is natural....that is the life of pen pushers! Keep on pushing kuya!

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Rommel Mark Dominguez Marchan

Rommel Mark Dominguez Marchan

a.k.a. Jetfellow Marchanism
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