Thursday, December 29, 2011

Pen Force Comments

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Don't let the pen lay idle
Where innocent blood shed;
Where there are starving
Children to be fed.
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Buxton Shippy
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Minnie Gehrig 12 January 2012

yes beautiful...well said words..enjoyed!

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Hans Vr 29 December 2011

Fantastic write, Buxton. So true, keep writing about the ills of the world and about the cure of unconditional love and kindness. The pen is powerful and thoughts are the seeds for the plant that will provide this world with a cure to greed and arroganc. Keep the pen alive. I really enjoyed reading this poem. It has a great message and is very well written.

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Manonton Dalan 29 December 2011

feeding hungry children is noble deed but preventing to have so many children destine to be hungry is real solution.

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Buxton Shippy

Buxton Shippy

Montego Bay, Jamaica
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