Monday, July 7, 2014

Pen Dance Comments

Rating: 5.0

My pen bops and moves in slow cadence
To the soft throb of melodic words
Inviting poetry Come
Partake in this great celebration
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Roseann Shawiak 03 September 2014

Cheryl, you have outdone yourself once again. This poem bops and moves in slow cadence to the soft throb of melodic words - indeed it does. Fascinating! ! Another 10, I'm afraid! Love this one also, for it's imagery, rhythm and wonderful vocabulary! ! You know how to use your words correctly for sure. Thank you for sharing, I am totally enjoying your poetry! RoseAnn

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F J Thomas 05 August 2014

Pen, paper, and the thinking mind hold quite the power; beautiful Cheryl :)

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Gajanan Mishra 07 July 2014

I raise this poem high, thanks,

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Cheryl Griffith

Cheryl Griffith

San Fernando Trinidad and Tobago
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