Tuesday, December 8, 2020

Pen And Poem Comments

Rating: 5.0

no fountain descending
touching the body of the mountain

it's a city of the windy fogs
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MAHTAB BANGALEE
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Britte Ninad 27 January 2021

Pen and poem my praying for inside tranquility ~nice craftmanship

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Ratnakar Mandlik 09 December 2020

" Turmoil of thoughts and gliding emotions In the company of throbbing heart. A boon or a curse gifted to a poet, Enhancing poor soul's complications" ! Enjoyed the poem. Thanks for sharing.5 stars.

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Varsha M 08 December 2020

Beautiful poetic expression. Well penned. Indeed poem and pen serve tranquility. Meaningful poetry.

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Khairul Ahsan 08 December 2020

A pen and a poem can redress a poets pains. This is a nice poem, with relatable imagery. 'like a coffin in a bier on the shoulder of the undertaker' - it's a wonderful depiction. 'Pen and poem my praying for inside tranquility' - this too is a touching expression.

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