Pen Comments

Ok..upon your soul, you pen....colouring the skin...the dying of the skin, the conscience gets twisted to alarm...may be a tatoo you mean? ..a twisting poem

May be penning a beautiful poem.........summons our soul to come fore.........and may be our skin is flush with colours of soul.................vow............this is what i understand.............may be i am wrong...........good write.......10+++.......

yeah to short but sweet lines

four lines that says it all...wonderful!