Monday, January 31, 2022

Pegasus Comments

Rating: 5.0

Insecure rulers
Snooping on their subjects
abandon wives
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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon
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Alyx True Edge 22 September 2024

An expressive focus on foolishness. Such a good idea to combine traces from the traditional Indian epic with the unsettling present

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At the top, everyone is alone. So he feels insecure. Needs to snoop on everyone…

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 03 February 2022

A great satire in three brilliant lines. Top Marks! ! !

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Unnikrishnan E S 04 February 2022

Thank you, Rose Marie. Satire is something that comes to me naturally, I believe. Feels very good to know you enjoyed

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 03 February 2022

To use this Pegasus to sweep away the sanctity of marriage is inconceivable. It must be abhorred.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 03 February 2022

Everyone has a basic right to privacy. Although such right has its limitations and exceptions, the right exists and there are consequences as mentioned by Robert.

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Dr. M. Asim Nehal 01 February 2022

Brilliant! ! ! ! Too good as a satire. Full ******

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Unnikrishnan E S 05 February 2022

Thank you, Dr Nehal.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 31 January 2022

To abandon wives? Really thought provoking. I appreciate thoughtful comment of poetess Aarzoo...Top score.

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Unnikrishnan E S 01 February 2022

Thank you, Dilipji. If a person can abandon his wife, who is pregnant with his child, is there anything he would not?

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Aarzoo Mehek 31 January 2022

Meaningful thought provoking words. Society never leaves anyone to live a life of dignity

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Unnikrishnan E S 01 February 2022

Everyone wants to snoop into the neighbors' bedroom, Aarzoo. An insecure ruler do not trust even his own shadow. Thank you Aarzoo.

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Unnikrishnan E S 01 February 2022

Dignity, what?

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Moxie De Lucky 31 January 2022

You just made me think and re-think again before reading a very good explanations of which mine based more on the political arena. I give this a very big five.

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Unnikrishnan E S 31 January 2022

Thank you, dear poet. I feel so happy that we are on the same wavelength. Obliged

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Unnikrishnan E S 31 January 2022

When rulers, especially those who are democratically elected, spy on their own subjects, it shows their sense of insecurity, their fear for their own people.

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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