Saturday, January 21, 2023

Peeking Through The Keyhole To Heaven Comments

Rating: 5.0

I'm floating like a breeze
High above the tallest trees
Is this still a dream?
Navigating through the sun's beam
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D.N. Rebb
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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 29 January 2023

Knocking questions. We get knocked out. We remain peeping through the suns key hole. Brilliant work built on your imagination, Rebb

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 22 January 2023

illusive keyhole of the clouds where the stairway to heavens is visible through the poetic subconsicious diction; interesting to read; beautiful imagery

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Jayne Louise Davies 21 January 2023

Just beautiful x Loved it! Well done.

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