Monday, May 5, 2014

Pee Poem Comments

Rating: 5.0

Funny the stuff that courses through
My demented brain
The electrical impulses must be shorting out
This late in life.
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Juan Olivarez
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Smoky Hoss 17 May 2014

Good one pard; I know what you're saying here!

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Valerie Dohren 05 May 2014

Ha, well, ok Juan - got the message!

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Colleen Courtney 05 May 2014

Never thought I'd say a poem written about pee was great but I got to hand it to you Juan. I find this write to be not just greatly humorous but adorable! Nicely done!

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