Friday, December 27, 2013

Pedestal Still A Prison Is Comments

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Beware of a perch lofty you might call.
Marbled pedestal, howso tall be still,
A prison is shorn of a red-brick wall,
And condemned is to live a life of chill.
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Bri Edwards 15 September 2019

2 – favorite lines: " Many a man so installed do I know, Who little if at all lifelong e'er grow, " Bri sits on ground, not pedestal for all to see, because from ground no one can topple me. bri :) to MyPoemList

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Aniruddha Pathak 20 September 2019

Thanks dear Bri for these two comments, first, for reading this 2007 poem awaiting a reader with comments for long. Second, for the specific comments. Indian English/rough, may be because these days prose goes in the name of poem/verse. In poetry diction is different. And Indian cannot but write an Indian English.

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Aniruddha Pathak 20 September 2019

contd, Sorry for delay in responding. I was travelling and will be in Bangalore for a while.

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Bri Edwards 15 September 2019

1 – 'put on a pedestal' means " To believe or behave as if someone or something is perfect, extraordinarily wonderful, or better than others" Like ME! ! ! :) i find the English a LITTLE rough; my Indian languages are a bit rusty as well.

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