Monday, March 5, 2012

Pebbles And Sand Comments

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An amber sunset clings to sea's horizon
Hues of molten lava bathed in coral pastel
Tall masts piercing stillness of unburdoned sky
Gulls in nightful bantor navigate shorelines
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Don MacIver
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Adeline Foster 06 March 2012

Ah, a lovely poem but I cannot believe that it is about Hamilton of even Stoney Creek. I lived on the Mountain for 8 years. Lots of fog but no 'salty maiden mist'. Read mine - Home Is - Adeline

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