Tuesday, November 8, 2016

Pebbles Comments

Rating: 4.1

Pebbles start ripples.
In rhyme's completed circles.
A single word can trigger
So many diverse tongues
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Tom Billsborough
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Bri Edwards 19 November 2016

so, Tom, Pebbles or PEBBLES? ? you said the later/latter/ladder? in your note! no, not ladder! ha ha favorite lines: For whom the waves of love Continue from a pool of sorrow............................ : ( to Section B of November's 'a showcase of PH poets' this shall go. the heck with my exercises! bri :)

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Bharati Nayak 08 November 2016

Thank you Tom Billsborough for referring me in this beautiful poem of yours.Even before reading your poet's note I could instantly relate to the poem.Pebbles starts ripples- - - Wow - - -what wisdom embedded in this short line ! ! Our very ordinary things too have such power to transform our life! A single word of love or a kind gesture can generate circles of waves in our mental sphere and completely hold us in its charm. Love resonates in the pool of sorrow through pebbles of silent memories. An amazing write, thanks for sharing.

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Tom Billsborough 09 November 2016

Dear Bharati, I found your Pebble poem unforgettable and it sent my mind thinking about small gestures that can have amazing consequences. I regard you as co-author of my poem and I put the acknowledgement in hoping that others would visit your work and enjoy the beauty of your thoughts, as I do.

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Pamela Sinicrope 08 November 2016

The poem was truly inspired. I imaged words as pebbles rippling through. Love the ending Tom. From love sorrow ripples out.

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Tom Billsborough 08 November 2016

Thanks, Pam. I hope I am beginning to find my voice again.

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Tom Billsborough 08 November 2016

Thanks, Donna. I find the same in your Senryus, bright thoughts and always endearing.

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Tom Billsborough

Tom Billsborough

Preston Lancashire England
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