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Pebbles of time
washing down the streams
piling up
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Revisiting this verse reminded me that the greatest sounds can come from the tiniest souls. A gem, Susan.
Wow! Great write! Pebbles have endless stories buried under the thick sand. Not enough listeners around ever.
Heartiest Congratulations dear Poetess.....10 + To my favorite
Wonderful pebbles waiting for their stories to be told.. They will shine and glow with unwritten words. Magnificent write Susan!
Thank you, Geeta--your soul is always so receptive and your heart is always kind
And now it has been chosen as member poem of the day! Very well deserved, indeed. Congratulations!
Congratulations on Member Poem Of The Day! Very well deserved. Wonderful write Susan x
This marvellous poem of Susie was ranked among top in the Best Poems of Members, featured on PoemHunter. Today it is the Poem of the Day. Most deserving. Congratulations, dear Susie. Take good care. All of us here want you back.
This is really a wonderful poem. Many things have changed but you are stable at your position. This volumnously speaks about your personality....Great!
Amazing, wonderful write! Brilliant Susan x Well done!
Wonderful poetry entitled, 'Pebbles'. A precise and precious poem to be treasured forever!
To My Favourites these PEBBLES, once again thank you somuch for sharing this brilliant poem.
I have enjoyed tremendously this fascinating poem, its meaning is endlessly put inside. How many times we read this fantastic poem, dear Susan, more things we unravel. Who could think that pebbles are able to do that? This is the Mystery of a 'simple' which in reality is NOT that simple!
Amazing great Poem, dear Susan. This is my first response, but this magnificent poem had not passed my way or the reverse. I am so sorry, BUT 5 Stars for YOU.
thank you for your responses to this piece--the kind of responses that encourage us to delve deeper
Very profound words Susan. Made my day! 5 stars though I wish I could give more.
Nosheen--that you read my efforts and find value in them lights up my skies! ! ! thank you, dear friend
Profound piece.....wonderful to read....thank u, dear poetess....
It's really a pebble of gem. But in the absence of a reply to my previous comment I cannot be quite confident of my view
An excellent poem! Significantly significant. Top score!