Tuesday, March 1, 2022

Pebbles Comments

Rating: 5.0

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Pebbles of time
washing down the streams
piling up
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Susan Williams
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Dr Dillip K Swain 24 October 2023

An excellent poem! Significantly significant. Top score!

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M.J. Lemon 03 April 2023

Revisiting this verse reminded me that the greatest sounds can come from the tiniest souls. A gem, Susan.

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Savita Tyagi 31 January 2023

Wow! Great write! Pebbles have endless stories buried under the thick sand. Not enough listeners around ever.

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Anjandev Roy 05 October 2022

Congratulations......this is an absolute gem.

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Susan Williams 09 October 2022

thank you, my dear constant friend

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 05 October 2022

Heartiest Congratulations dear Poetess.....10 + To my favorite

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 05 October 2022

Wonderful pebbles waiting for their stories to be told.. They will shine and glow with unwritten words. Magnificent write Susan!

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Susan Williams 09 October 2022

Thank you, Geeta--your soul is always so receptive and your heart is always kind

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Ruta Mohapatra 05 October 2022

Congrats on POD, Susan...

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Susan Williams 09 October 2022

thank you for reading it!

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Kim Barney 04 October 2022

And now it has been chosen as member poem of the day! Very well deserved, indeed. Congratulations!

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Jayne Louise Davies 04 October 2022

Congratulations on Member Poem Of The Day! Very well deserved. Wonderful write Susan x

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Dr Dillip K Swain 04 October 2022

A precious poem. So many congratulations! !

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This marvellous poem of Susie was ranked among top in the Best Poems of Members, featured on PoemHunter. Today it is the Poem of the Day. Most deserving. Congratulations, dear Susie. Take good care. All of us here want you back.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 13 September 2022

This is really a wonderful poem. Many things have changed but you are stable at your position. This volumnously speaks about your personality....Great!

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Jayne Louise Davies 05 September 2022

Amazing, wonderful write! Brilliant Susan x Well done!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 05 September 2022

Wonderful poetry entitled, 'Pebbles'. A precise and precious poem to be treasured forever!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 28 August 2022

To My Favourites these PEBBLES, once again thank you somuch for sharing this brilliant poem.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 28 August 2022

I have enjoyed tremendously this fascinating poem, its meaning is endlessly put inside. How many times we read this fantastic poem, dear Susan, more things we unravel. Who could think that pebbles are able to do that? This is the Mystery of a 'simple' which in reality is NOT that simple!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 28 August 2022

Amazing great Poem, dear Susan. This is my first response, but this magnificent poem had not passed my way or the reverse. I am so sorry, BUT 5 Stars for YOU.

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Susan Williams 04 September 2022

thank you for your responses to this piece--the kind of responses that encourage us to delve deeper

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Nosheen Irfan 28 August 2022

Very profound words Susan. Made my day! 5 stars though I wish I could give more.

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Susan Williams 04 September 2022

Nosheen--that you read my efforts and find value in them lights up my skies! ! ! thank you, dear friend

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Anjandev Roy 27 August 2022

Profound piece.....wonderful to read....thank u, dear poetess....

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Susan Williams 04 September 2022

I am glad you found this a worthy read, my friend

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It's really a pebble of gem. But in the absence of a reply to my previous comment I cannot be quite confident of my view

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