Sunday, July 26, 2009

Pebble Through A Motion Comments

Rating: 4.8

Living my life…
Walking through rivers of strife
Deteriorating like a pebble through the motion
Wondering when I will ever reach the ocean
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Sara Tehrani
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Mona Martinez 19 August 2009

lovely! ! ! love the way it flowed, everything about it seemed perfect to me. i enjoyed reading it. thanks.

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V F 17 August 2009

this one is very beautifully painted too.. thanks for sharing..

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Duh Huh 26 July 2009

A beautiful poem. It shows the hope and inner strength of the writer. You are a poet young lady. Keep up the good work, i will be back for more. Thank you for sharing your talent. :) regards Nora

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