Pebble Three Comments

Intriguing poem, my friend. I wonder, I wonder, how long will the sun keep burning

Wonderful, Ali. Even the eternal has some resting place. I am discovering a sense of peace in your words.

Wow dear, this is wonderful....the sunrise and sunset play, then as the birth of soot from fiery air to be into this thought made your poem expensive..i loved it

This amazing thought shared here generates more thoughts in mind. Sun's life journey is witnessed. This poem is really very brilliant...10