Sunday, January 29, 2012

Pearly Gates Comments

Rating: 4.5

If the waters washed over
All the chalk I scratched into the black board
If the mountains fell over
The footsteps that we printed along the way
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Sara Tehrani
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Alexander Johnson 08 February 2012

Wonderful poem Sara, I love the sense of confusion and longing that permeates this poem. Its often the way we feel about the people or things we care about. Also thanks for your comments on one of my more cheeky poems, diamonds..

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Pheko Motaung 07 February 2012

An outstanding poem! Marvelous well done! A fabulous and fantastic read.I believe you're the one to watch.The universe of poetry belongs to you!

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Francis Tikava 02 February 2012

Very nice poem. Good wording. Could you read my poems please?

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Dave Walker 02 February 2012

A very beautiful poem, really like it. A great write. May i invite you to read my poem called, An Angel Cries.

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Saadat Tahir 29 January 2012

If nothing makes sense anymore but only a lie Will you still be the only thing I know? ....Sleeping use to be my escape beautiful lines....very very nice :) -b hpy

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