Sunday, August 30, 2015

Pearls Of Tears Comments

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Smile of roses is now turned in pearls.
Eyes are red and wet in tears,
How helpless is the man!
A single life and so many fears!
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Valsa George 02 September 2015

Yes, often man is helpless. Frozen sorrow melts in tears! Lovely write!

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Khalida Bano Ali 31 August 2015

The sonnet is a melting pearl, very impressive...............................10

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Kelly Kurt 30 August 2015

I am sure that there are meanings here that I don't understand. But the ones I relate to, completely melt my soul

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Akhtar Jawad 31 August 2015

If it melt you, it means you have understood the poem. Thanks, Kelly Kurt.

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