Sunday, April 8, 2007

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A pearl in an ocean of dreams,
What can I say, shot the beams?

A pearl in an ocean of hopes,
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Andrea Szyhowski
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Jenny F. Diamond 06 June 2008

nice! I like the way you always start out with the same first words, and then on the last verse you differ that. It's a really good poem, keep up the good work!

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Andrea Szyhowski

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