Thursday, March 12, 2009

* * * Pearls Comments

Rating: 5.0

Blue the star often is invisible in the blue sky...
But I do not want dark clouds for a background...
Morning dew - as heavenly the tears
Of pleasure from his smile is...
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Tsira Gogeshvili
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Afzal Shauq 08 February 2010

Blue the star often is invisible in the blue sky... But I do not want dark clouds for a background... Morning dew - as heavenly the tears Of pleasure from his smile is... I collect on my palm this the pearls... lovely piece of work.. done professionally.. impressive and soul touching one..hmmm loved it 10/10

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Allan Macli Borges 21 March 2009

so short and so beautiful too... filled with emotion all through. its flows easily and enchants the reader.10 for you.

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 15 March 2009

beautiful piece, heavenly poem, thanks for sharing 10

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