Monday, April 13, 2009

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While on an Eastern beach,
you might see,
among trash and seashells
she is fishing,
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Elizabeth Middleton 15 April 2009

I love it! I want to just read it again and again :) The metaphors are rather thought provoking and intriguing. Bravo!

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Jim Butler 15 April 2009

This is really neat! I really like the way that you put people into your poems and develope them. You sort of reveal their lives. Very cool! !

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