Wednesday, February 6, 2013

Peacock, Triolet Comments

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Taken from rainbow colors of your wing,
silken feathers; symbol of pride and glory.
Fly with hop, can't stay long in the wind,
taken from rainbow colors of your wing.
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S.D. TIWARI
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 06 February 2013

what shall we expect from the national bird of India? Colorful past! but your poem is beautiful!

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Gajanan Mishra 06 February 2013

Symbol of pride and glory. Fine. I like it. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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S.D. TIWARI

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