Tuesday, December 31, 2019

Peaches Comments

Rating: 5.0

i love peaches
especially in summer
the fuzz the sweetness
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M.J. Lemon
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Mj Lemon 21 September 2020

Thank you so much, Valsa. And indeed, there is more than one peach...

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Valsa George 19 September 2020

You are fond of peaches and you have named your pet furry cat (or could be a dog) 'Peach'. On calling her by the name, she comes running and you are happy that she is a good listener and naughty too (gnaws at the sofa) . A poem that allows the readers to think and come out with different interpretations!

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Susan Williams 18 May 2020

Peaches sounds like such a pet! Purrfect companion and doggone pleased to see you! Love this piece! 10

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Mj Lemon 18 May 2020

The absolute best pet! And thank you for reading, Susan.

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Bri Edwards 10 January 2020

stanza 1: i thought/think you meant fruits stanza 2: punctuation would help me to NOT misread this. stanza 3: Ok, maybe " Peaches" is a squirrel, a mouse, or a rat? and which other animal gets " Peaches" treats buried in its fur: cat, goat, or rabbit? ? ? I noticed this title on the Home page, to which i'm rarely drawn. i decided to read the poem because " Peaches" is a woman's nickname in a novel i'm now reading. bri :)

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Mj Lemon 13 January 2020

Thank you, Bri! How is Peaches (in the novel, I mean) ? And this verse has multiple meanings to me, with more than one 'peach'. Punctuation- that enemy (well, that's maybe exaggeration) of figurative language! ! ! - it would preclude at least 3 readings of stanza 2.

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Leeann Azzopardi 08 January 2020

OH to be blessed with a beautiful pet (I believe a dog- maybe a cat) I have the pleasure of a joyful dog. Bravo!

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Mj Lemon 09 January 2020

Thank you, LeeAnn...and yes, one of the peaches is a truly friendly fuzzball pet.

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Muhammad Ali 05 January 2020

Nice poem. As it is discussed in other comments, some hidden references make this poem more beautiful. And peachea plus a good listener is an additional and worth quality.

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Mj Lemon 07 January 2020

Thank you so much, Muhammad. And yes, there are (plural) peaches to love...

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Unwritten Soul 02 January 2020

Hmmm but maybe not a pet, Richard is right😊

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Mj Lemon 02 January 2020

Indeed! Thanks for reading, Soul.

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Unwritten Soul 02 January 2020

The sweetie must be as soft and in peach colour as well... How cute to read and to imagine the lovely cat running when the name called, and gnawl, i just almost imagine that vividlly by reading yours. The cuteness of what you felt and the cat itself (maybe other pet) are well transfered by words. Effective! Another side of you that i dont see in other poem, a sweet animal lover! .

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Mj Lemon 02 January 2020

Thank you so much, Soul. Yes, the fuzzball in question was indeed a nice peach colour. But as Richard mentioned, it might include another possibility, and it does!

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Richard Wlodarski 31 December 2019

How sweet it is to be loved by you! Do pets love their owners less or more than owners loving their pets? Doesn't really matter. The loyalty between the two is unbelievable! M.J., this is truly a fine tribute to loyalty. Congrats on yet another winner! And what makes it an even bigger winner is that Peaches could be a female human being. How's that for interpretation? !

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Mj Lemon 01 January 2020

That is a brilliant insight, Richard! The history of this poem started out as three different things/issues. I realised there is a connection....or connections. Thank you so much, Richard.

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