Monday, February 17, 2014

Peaceful Waters Comments

Rating: 5.0

Drifting into deepest waters, floating carelessly
upon waves of remorseless fatigue.

Up to shoulders in a fast moving ocean current,
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RoseAnn V. Shawiak
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Hans Vr 17 February 2014

The reader floats along while reading the poem. A very interesting poem. I interpret it as elements of fatalism and hope of fatigue and expectations mixing and creating this floating feeling. A ten

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RoseAnn V. Shawiak

RoseAnn V. Shawiak

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