Thursday, May 18, 2006

Peaceful Sleep Comments

Rating: 5.0

In this big room people stir
Soundly sleeping one by one
For this moment all is gone
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Lisa Cresswell Wilkinson
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David Harris 08 April 2007

Lisa, this is a beautiful peaceful poem, but a sad one for what it hints at but doesn't say. Top Marks from me. Thanks for sharing it my friend. David

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Brian Dorn 17 December 2006

Lisa, you convey quite nicely the easy feeling of a good night's rest... for some of us it's like winning the lottery, if we could all be so lucky. Good write! Brian

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Andrew Castillo 06 June 2006

Wow...You've written wonderful poems and haikus. I must say I enjoy this one the best. *Andrew*

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Lisa Cresswell Wilkinson

Lisa Cresswell Wilkinson

Northumberland, England
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