Tuesday, June 19, 2012

Peaceful Sleep. Comments

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I stand so near, I cannot see
Differences 'tween the sea and me
I shed 'ts brine, it my tears
It happens so, I stand so near
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Ritika Abrol
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Heather Wilkins 01 September 2014

peaceful sleep is well written the third stanza very beautiful thanks for sharing

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Godfrey Morris 20 June 2012

Lovely poetry. Your way of expressing thought is what I admire.

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