Wednesday, May 6, 2015

Peaceful Shall I Sleep Comments

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When this day comes
I thank you
To walk free
Peaceful shall I sleep
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Lyn Paul
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Edward Kofi Louis 06 April 2016

Peace is the key. Nice work.

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Jak Black 14 May 2015

Another well written, meaningful piece. The modern world has become so stressful for the vast majority. Materialism is the modern day religion. We should realise that the raw materials are finite and become more minimalistic. Easier said than done! Death does not bring peace, Lyn, just finality.

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 13 May 2015

Truly said, we all March towards the final march of liffe

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Valsa George 11 May 2015

Yes, oneday we shall be free..... cut loose from all tethers of life! True liberation comes only then! Do you dread that day or do you really look in anticipation for it....... I wonder! A beautiful write Lyn!

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Amitava Sur 07 May 2015

Hi - Lyn, I loved this write. The true and ultimate sense of freedom fromm life's all pains and strife. Very nice.

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