Thursday, November 20, 2008

Peaceful Melancholy Comments

Rating: 4.5

Along a dusty road with dried vegetation on each side
The tall grey trees with dust covered leaves stare
A dreary melancholy stare
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Elizabeth Jacqueline Mpanga
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Dr Antony Theodore 30 August 2017

the poetic quality is so fine and i read it again and again cherishing the words and images.. thank you very much dear poetess.. tony

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Joseph Poewhit 20 November 2008

The wind and trees sing a song of nature

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Sebastine Humaemo 20 November 2008

nice to read.........

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Homen Thangjam 20 November 2008

Title is beautiful. Can we change the 'scotched' in to 'scorched' in the first line of the second para. 'Sun (scotched) scorched barks (creeks) creek in silence' Just a suggestion. Beautiful poem, gives hope.

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