Along a dusty road with dried vegetation on each side
The tall grey trees with dust covered leaves stare
A dreary melancholy stare
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Title is beautiful. Can we change the 'scotched' in to 'scorched' in the first line of the second para. 'Sun (scotched) scorched barks (creeks) creek in silence' Just a suggestion. Beautiful poem, gives hope.
the poetic quality is so fine and i read it again and again cherishing the words and images.. thank you very much dear poetess.. tony