Wednesday, August 9, 2017

Peaceful And Cool Comments

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Waiting for a day that never comes
Hoping for a night that is a dream
I know sun will never enter my room
Through a broken window I see a beam.
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Valsa George 09 August 2017

Somehow to remain peaceful and happy is the sole pursuit of each man! If you have got this, you are indeed lucky! A beautiful poem......!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 August 2017

This is a gorgeous poem on old age having stunning expression. The last lines are most attractive... Flowers of a creeper too high for me Lovely lotus but in a too deep pool Content with artificial colorful flowers Isn't it a wealth, I'm peaceful and cool.

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Rini Shibu 09 August 2017

Well writen The most unexpected things happens during this period.. You may like my poem' old age'

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