Monday, April 13, 2015

Peace We Have To Find Comments

Rating: 5.0

Is night after day?
Or is day after night?
Is fight after peace?
Or is peace after fight?
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Savita Tyagi 05 September 2019

Great poem. Once these age old questions that seem to have no solid answer stop bothering us Peace is sure to come. Thank you for sharing.

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Heather W.B. 12 February 2019

We need to get peace and peace motivates mind always. Peace deeply impacts life and at every breath we feel excellence of living. This is a very nice poem really. Sorry for typing error in previous comment.

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Heather W.B. 12 February 2019

We need to het peace and peace motivates mind always. Peace deeply impacts life and at every breath we feel excellence of living. This is a very nice poem really.

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Pushpendra Patel 12 February 2019

Every one needs peace in life. We love peace and peaceful poems like this. You have taken care of writing a beautiful poem.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 27 October 2018

A very clever write. A riddle type poem to give emphasis to an important theme., peace. Well crafted and composed. Liked reading it.10

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Geetha Jayakumar 27 May 2015

Wonderful riddles running in both the ways. In either way it is right and wrong also. Beautiful presentation. Loved reading it.

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Valsa George 18 May 2015

What ever be the puzzles before us, peace to a great extent is our own make! Even in a big storm, a rock is never shaken! In the same way, a man who is at peace with himself is never disturbed by external pressures! It was fun reading this riddle poem!

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 20 April 2015

I loved the conclusion of your poem!

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Akhtar Jawad 16 April 2015

There are many things that are simultaneous like sound and vibration. Perhaps there are two universes one moving clockwise and the other anticlockwise. A thoughtful and interesting write.

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Kavya . 14 April 2015

haha a roller coaster poem, , , , really enjoyed reading....A nice message at the end too

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Kavya . 14 April 2015

haha a roller coaster poem, , , , really enjoyed reading

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Kelly Kurt 13 April 2015

I really enjoy how you dedicate to the people of the world. If we each find peace with ourselves, then peace will spread throughout. Let us hope.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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