Is night after day?
Or is day after night?
Is fight after peace?
Or is peace after fight?
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We need to get peace and peace motivates mind always. Peace deeply impacts life and at every breath we feel excellence of living. This is a very nice poem really. Sorry for typing error in previous comment.
We need to het peace and peace motivates mind always. Peace deeply impacts life and at every breath we feel excellence of living. This is a very nice poem really.
Every one needs peace in life. We love peace and peaceful poems like this. You have taken care of writing a beautiful poem.
A very clever write. A riddle type poem to give emphasis to an important theme., peace. Well crafted and composed. Liked reading it.10
Wonderful riddles running in both the ways. In either way it is right and wrong also. Beautiful presentation. Loved reading it.
What ever be the puzzles before us, peace to a great extent is our own make! Even in a big storm, a rock is never shaken! In the same way, a man who is at peace with himself is never disturbed by external pressures! It was fun reading this riddle poem!
There are many things that are simultaneous like sound and vibration. Perhaps there are two universes one moving clockwise and the other anticlockwise. A thoughtful and interesting write.
haha a roller coaster poem, , , , really enjoyed reading....A nice message at the end too
I really enjoy how you dedicate to the people of the world. If we each find peace with ourselves, then peace will spread throughout. Let us hope.
Great poem. Once these age old questions that seem to have no solid answer stop bothering us Peace is sure to come. Thank you for sharing.