Wednesday, February 19, 2014

Peace Was A River Comments

Rating: 4.2

When the gentle splashing of the paddles
is just a whisper across the memory
of a day on the river...
When the canoes are banked, quietly dripping
...
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Seamus O' Brian
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Glen Kappy 25 January 2017

seamus, i'm just starting to read your poetry. i became aware of you from comments you made on a laurie van der hart poem. for now i just want to note i'm impressed by the large cupboard of words you have to pick from. the phrase from this poem that stands out for me is cocoon-muffled giggles. nice! it summons the scene and is consistent with the scene. on to more of your poems, glen kappy

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Elena Sandu 13 December 2016

Most wonderful penning, soulful, serene, for a moment my feet were in the river's mud and I was lost in time. A poem with an amazing energy, it heals the eyes, riches the mind and eased my soul, thank you!

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Seamus O Brian 13 December 2016

I am so very pleased that this poem communicated to you so much of what the river gave me on that peaceful evening. Thank you for your gracious and very poetic comments.

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Tan Pratonix 21 November 2016

I am delighted to discover an excellent poet here on Poemhunter. Such memorable lines, a masterly command over language, a deft depiction of mood. I am so glad that Neal who has been quietly reading my poems and commenting is himself such a superior poet. This poem rates a 10!

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Tom Billsborough 08 November 2016

A very fine contemplative poem. The images are sharply drawn and the poem's rhythm matches the subject perfectly. Think I'll put this in my favourites' list. It is one to re-read often. I note the line with the embers of my fire and it recalls a poem I wrote about Virgil's 10th Eclogue. It is called Ite Domum Saturae! and is on PH if you'd care to read it. Virgil's poem contains that most famouus of lines Love cpnquers all and we must yield to Love by the way.

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Seamus O' Brian

Seamus O' Brian

Galway, Ireland
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