Oh Peace
Where are you?
Are you that bird flying
Up high looking
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Your comments are very encouraging and blissful really.I thank u from the bottom of my heart.
This poem still fascinates me, truly a profound poem. Yes! Peace until Eternity! Powerfully worded.I like it very very much!
Rereading this most touching poem so amazingly worded, and the undertones left are still very touching to me. Thank you so much for this mesmerizing poem. It does me good having reread thia.
Oh, Wow! .. Beautifully painted! .. Beautiful feel! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++and, May you always find peace! ...
Once peace arrives, you never want it to leave. This is an inspiring poem full of hopeful positivity and happy possibility.
Elegantly brought forth with artistic excellence. A beautiful work of art. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched, Rose.
Poetic innocence. I liked the way you questioned everything, Thoughtful poem.5*****
Peace.. The Goddess! ! Fenced around With prickles Safely seated on her throne She's in tranThose prickles You touch them To find your hurt conscience Cleared the prickles There you vision Peace the Goddess......great work Rose....top starsce...
You always deserve the highest marks. Love your poems dear Rose
Dear Rose Marie, i have similar thoughts like you... to dwell with peace eternally
These are queries that we all ask for and aspire too.
Oh Peace Where are you? Are you that bird flying Up high looking For lush forest For your lovely nest?
Rose Marie peace is a piece right beside us if you can see for pollution of doubt allows us not to see it best. Peace of my masterpiece hide no more please. Beautiful composition.
A poem so worthy of all our admiration and love. Woven with the glory of a peace loving dove.
1) Indeed, Peace WHERE are YOU? ! I cite you here your last stanza: : Oh Peace Do not hide We want to know you Be with you Dwell with you Until Eternity. Most touching poem and so sweetest rendered. Very impressive words, marvelously worded.5 Stars full on Top! To my Favourites
Nice honest desire.I welcome your great mind.